It is quite good, imo. The eyes are great, they are drawn in good perspective, and they stand out as the centrepiece of the art because of its great amount of detail. My only criticism is that try to draw in a larger canvas. Sharpen some lines to bring out the figure and details. Try to use guiding lines in some parts to attain good perspective. The mouth part can be improved. Overall, it is a solid 7.5/10