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Word Game : Telling A Story


Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"No...Thank you..." He said with a gratefull smile "...For everything..." He continue as he slowly release his hug.
"....You know, i was tempted to just be here and looking at your beautifull face all night...." He mutter before take one of her hand and kiss it gently "But...i guess the faster we help our 'Matchmaker', the faster we can have our....date? Is that what they call it."
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"Let's go see if she found anything," Eris stood and smiled regretfully. She turned and looked to the barn to see it engulfed in a large force field. "Something is wrong!" she yelled out running toward it.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
The final door opened and Elektra tightened her grip on Casryth's hand. "Are you ready Mommy?" she asked.
"Yes baby," Casryth spoke.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"....Ck." His eye started to glow as he tried to see the inside of the barn. "Casryth is there....but her body is cold...too cold..." His eyes then widen "Her body is still alive...but her soul...its gone..?! What with people and go to Limbos these day?! First Zeref and now her."
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
Eris ran closer to the dome and just as she reached the edge she was sucked into it by an unknown force. She was thrown to the ground inside the dome. She stood to her feet, freezing, snow falling around her. "Casryth, wake up! Please wake up! You are Ice cold, you have to stay warm!"
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
".....My guess is...her soul now doing her second trials." He mutter as he tried to break the force field.
"The cold help her body stay alive....but too long she will got Hypothermia and trully die...."
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"Stay back Zehn, I don't know what will happen in here. I don't want you to get trapped too." Eris called out to him on the other side of the dome. The cold was starting to get to her and her teeth chattered as she fell to the ground because of the cold.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"ERIS!" He quickly lift her and flare his wings to avoid the freezing snow. He then looking for high tree for them.
"....Worry about yourself first before me!" He quickly take out a red colored potion from his belly mouth after gently put Eris in one of a higher tree branch. He gently lift the bottle to her mouth.
"Drink it...please."
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Casryth entered the final door, and fell once again into the darkness.

"GET UP!" a man's voice yelled. Casryth pushed herself off of the floor and knelt a moment. A man kicked her hard in the gut, sending her flying back onto the ground. The pain rocked through her body. She only needed to endure this beating for a few more moments.

"Make me," she yelled antagonizing him. She remembered this pain. She allowed herself to be captured so that her people would have the chance to flee to the safety of the new town she had created. She led the invaders here to follow her and leave her people alone.

"I'll make you do many things, False Queen, you will see," the man said as she stood painfully to her feet. His men surrounded her, watching the exchange, jeering and taunting her. She smiled insanely, and staggered forward, pretending to be weak.

He laughed and stepped forward and as he did, she punched him in the gut, then as he doubled over in pain, she kneed him in the face, and then she removed her hidden dagger and stabbed him through the heart.

"Who else wishes to be next?" she taunted, covered in blood. She only needed to buy a little more time.
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"Zehn, why did you come in here," she said sadly touching her hand to his face. "We can only postpone the effects of this curse, but only Casryth can save us now. If she fails, we will not be able to leave. We will die here. you should have protected yourself," she added, a tear sliding down her cheek and freezing.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Around them, the fake world shook.

"Mommy you have to hurry, your friends are trapped now too, they will freeze to death!" Elektra yelled.
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"Keep Casryth warm, she has been in here longer, she will die, Zehn.," Eris spoke softly. "Please we have to cover her with something warm and dry."
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"....Like hell i will let a chill kill you both..." He said as he take another two potions with his now frostbitten hands, he then bits his index finger and mix it blood with potion. He then give one to Eris and gently open Casryth mouth to pour it.
 
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CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Casryth nodded to Elektra, knowing the phantom men couldn't see her. Just then, the bell in the clock tower rang, signalling her to fulfill the next part of the plan.

As the men lunged at her, she fought as many as she could. Bodies lay all around the hall and blood painted it's walls.

When she had a spare moment unattacked, she held out her hands and summoned a large fire to wipe out the kingdom, to keep it from being overrun by the men. The flames burned her skin, but she fought through the pain until they all turned to ash. She then took a small snow globe from her bag of holding. The city she stood in was only a duplicate, their real kingdom hidden away until the day she could restore it.

This was her greatest secret. If anyone found out they would be in immense danger.

The King must first return to restore the kingdom.


Casryth was thrown to the ground painfully. Her head smashed against the floor.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
He then take two big fluffy blanket made from bears hide and cover the two women with it, he also use his wings to warm them up, though it started to blackened because of the frostbite.
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
Moments later the woman appeared again. "The second trial has been completed!" she called out. A small child-like figure appeared standing over Casryth as the storm cleared and the snow disappeared. All effects of the cold were gone.

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"Who are you?" Eris called out, clinging to Zehn. Just then the figure grabbed a mystical figure and threw it into Casryth's body. She sat up gasping for air painfully, crying out.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
"You did it Mommy!!!!!!!! You saved them. I love you!" the figure called out as it disappeared.

"Elektra! Elektra baby!" Casryth cried out but it was too late.

Without saying another word, she stood painfully to her feet and limped outside. She collapsed just outside the barn, weak and unable to continue.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
Zehn slowly stand up, wincing a bit as his fingers and wings now ruined and fall apart, that gonna need few hours to regenerate.
He then help Eris standing before walk to Casryth collapsing form and gently lift her up.
He then look at Eris with a small smile. "....Who up for some hot chocolates?"
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
"Please, I just need a moment or two, and then I will join you both...." Casryth fought back her tears, not wanting Zehn or Eris to see her cry. Asteria came over and curled up at Casryth's feet.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"......Alright.....take your time." He smiled bitterly before gently let her go. He then gift a blanket to her. "...It will keep you warm..." He then turn to the barn and cover Eris with another blanket. "...She need to be alone right now...we better help her afterward though." He then sigh. "Memory of the lost one is hard to deal with...." He continue with pained smile
 
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