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"Liam is right you know......" Zehn said with serious tone to her. "You need to rest Casryth....We can watch little Eliana for you....right girl?" He look at the baby for agreement whos currently use the unconsious Goblin as plaything by poking his eyes with her toy sword....sigh they growth so fast. Eliana only cooed to Zehn before continue 'playing' under Eris watch.
".....See?" He said with proud look on his faces.
".....See?" He said with proud look on his faces.
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Meanwhile In Heaven.......
Zehn cleches his jaw "Is this really necessary they have already passed the trials so why doesn't he just leave these people alone" Zeref said the annoyence clearly evident in his voice,"Our job is not to question father's will little brother but to implement it without question said heaven's voice Gabriel "I know that you are voice of god but that doesn't means that he can just say whatever he feels like through you without being himself present" he said not backing down
Gabriel looked at her brother with a smile "Is it because it is connected with you or because you want to see father again", in answer Zeref just grind his teeth because he knew that she was right in both ways,"You know if i'm the one to do this then they don't stand a chance" Zeref said with a more serious face
"That little brother is something you should leave for the fates to decide, now prepare yourself to descend on Earth and fulfill your destiny" she said to Zeref as he flung his wings out and flew straight towards the land of destiny itself Earth
Zehn cleches his jaw "Is this really necessary they have already passed the trials so why doesn't he just leave these people alone" Zeref said the annoyence clearly evident in his voice,"Our job is not to question father's will little brother but to implement it without question said heaven's voice Gabriel "I know that you are voice of god but that doesn't means that he can just say whatever he feels like through you without being himself present" he said not backing down
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Gabriel looked at her brother with a smile "Is it because it is connected with you or because you want to see father again", in answer Zeref just grind his teeth because he knew that she was right in both ways,"You know if i'm the one to do this then they don't stand a chance" Zeref said with a more serious face
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"That little brother is something you should leave for the fates to decide, now prepare yourself to descend on Earth and fulfill your destiny" she said to Zeref as he flung his wings out and flew straight towards the land of destiny itself Earth
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Zehn who currently playing peek-a-boo with Eliana feel a suddent headache coming....along with a rush of memories. Right now? Wow...either Satan is really weakened or he just given up. He just seat there for a moment as he filtered all the images one by one....completely unafected by Eliana who now poking his nose with a toy sword, the little girl just loooove attention. And as he nearly finished scanning all centuries worth of memories in his mind he stumble into Satan few last moment....and he almost screeming like a little girl infront of...well little girl.
Oh...boy, thats definitely not good...at all. He needs to inform Liam, Casryth and espessially Leviathan.....Behemoth is still alive...and hes currently not on their sides.
Oh...boy, thats definitely not good...at all. He needs to inform Liam, Casryth and espessially Leviathan.....Behemoth is still alive...and hes currently not on their sides.
Zeref lands near a dilapidated castle surrounded by dense foliage from trees as he furl his wings inside he notices a strong demonic presence behind him "Never thought i would see you like this Behemoth" he says to the giant demon who was once the pride of the demon army
"Grkk such strong divine essence" Behemoth said as he backed away a few feet "Who are you? and how i'm still alive? He said as he retraced his memory till the moment he died
"That's not important" Zeref said in a commanding tone which even made the proud general go still,"Let's just say you are part of a grander scheme of things and you and I are gonna work together" he said and with a snap he put a barrier around the place and the castle was once again restored to its original Beauty,"Come now its time we fulfill our destiny"
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"Grkk such strong divine essence" Behemoth said as he backed away a few feet "Who are you? and how i'm still alive? He said as he retraced his memory till the moment he died
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"That's not important" Zeref said in a commanding tone which even made the proud general go still,"Let's just say you are part of a grander scheme of things and you and I are gonna work together" he said and with a snap he put a barrier around the place and the castle was once again restored to its original Beauty,"Come now its time we fulfill our destiny"
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Behemoth almost reach Zeref hands before suddently punching him in the face until broke castles walls.
Behemoth....or if it can called that stared at the winged man infront of him.
As light shine him, revealing his figure. A absolutely gigantic man at 7 feet heigh with body full off tight muscle, two thick horn sprout from his forehead, a massive pair of wing tucked behind him and a thick reptilian tail stiffly in his base spine.
He look at Zeref with face that seems to carved straight from a marble, as a pair of blood red eyes stare with blank expression....like theres not a soul behind it. Or rather, somthing controlling them.
"Zeref....Son of God....threat level....kill at sight....request backup." The giant mutter with monotone tone as suddently a massive black portal appearing behind him. One by one demon started to come out from it, tall, short, fat, muscular all have different shapes and form but one similiarity, their eyes look glazed and unfocused, like a mindless puppet. 1, 20, 32...72...theres total 72 Demon from there....and all of them supposted to be death....yeah it seems Zalam Damis not only revieving Satan, but also all 72 Arch duke of hell under his command....isnt that great?
"Kill...." The Elephant general said and all hell broke lost.
Behemoth....or if it can called that stared at the winged man infront of him.
As light shine him, revealing his figure. A absolutely gigantic man at 7 feet heigh with body full off tight muscle, two thick horn sprout from his forehead, a massive pair of wing tucked behind him and a thick reptilian tail stiffly in his base spine.
He look at Zeref with face that seems to carved straight from a marble, as a pair of blood red eyes stare with blank expression....like theres not a soul behind it. Or rather, somthing controlling them.
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"Zeref....Son of God....threat level....kill at sight....request backup." The giant mutter with monotone tone as suddently a massive black portal appearing behind him. One by one demon started to come out from it, tall, short, fat, muscular all have different shapes and form but one similiarity, their eyes look glazed and unfocused, like a mindless puppet. 1, 20, 32...72...theres total 72 Demon from there....and all of them supposted to be death....yeah it seems Zalam Damis not only revieving Satan, but also all 72 Arch duke of hell under his command....isnt that great?
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"Kill...." The Elephant general said and all hell broke lost.
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Zeref rubbed his jaw,"Well can't say i didn't expect it afterall i was the one who killed you but really is that the best you got" Zeref said in a mocking tone
And unfurled his majestic wings full with holy light all the demons went to their knees after such a display of strength not even Behemoth himself could stand for long as his knees buckled and he bowed unceremoniously to the Son of God
"That's much better now i want you to tell me everything that you know Behemoth i know you are hiding the real truth about the war of the heavens i know all the accounts of that war were false father never killed satan because he cannot die by his hands only i have the authority to end a divine life like i did with yours
Zeref stood in front of Behemoth and his army who were still on there knees "This is pointless fine if you want time to think you can have it i'm not going anywhere either", Zeref said as he went straight towards the castle to plan his next move the time was coming closer and he knew was getting closer to the truth too
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And unfurled his majestic wings full with holy light all the demons went to their knees after such a display of strength not even Behemoth himself could stand for long as his knees buckled and he bowed unceremoniously to the Son of God
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"That's much better now i want you to tell me everything that you know Behemoth i know you are hiding the real truth about the war of the heavens i know all the accounts of that war were false father never killed satan because he cannot die by his hands only i have the authority to end a divine life like i did with yours
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Zeref stood in front of Behemoth and his army who were still on there knees "This is pointless fine if you want time to think you can have it i'm not going anywhere either", Zeref said as he went straight towards the castle to plan his next move the time was coming closer and he knew was getting closer to the truth too
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"Lucifer....dint die....he was sealed....save us..." Behemoth started with monotone voice.
''....Master Zalam Danis....want to free him......Save us..." Another voice this want from a short childlike Demon, Valak.
"...Take over Heaven....Save us......please...." Was the last sentence from a red haired Demon, Gremory before all the 73 Demon army dissapear with a swirl of black, as the Creature calling them back....the battle will began soon.
''....Master Zalam Danis....want to free him......Save us..." Another voice this want from a short childlike Demon, Valak.
"...Take over Heaven....Save us......please...." Was the last sentence from a red haired Demon, Gremory before all the 73 Demon army dissapear with a swirl of black, as the Creature calling them back....the battle will began soon.
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After some quick thinking.... this is the best i can got Mr. King.
Zehn continue played with Elianna though, his mind already wondering into Father know where. Receaving the memories from Satan dint help him but rather giving him more question.... How this Zalam Damis... thing can revive not onlh Satan but also all 72 duke of hell as well?! He thought only his Father can do that!
He takes a deep breath as Eliana only stared confusedly at her caretaker.
'Alright Zehn... calm down.... try to make.... any senses of it.' He thought as he give a smile before rubbing Eliana tiny head, that help calm him a bit.
'Now then, lets see....Zalam Damis which is Arabic for 'Darkness unhinged'....pros for creativity....considering it was an Arabic name, so a being or maybe deity...let me think....what an evil being that was strong enough in middle eas-......it was Ahriman isnt it?' Zehn almost planned his face into the floor as he finish his deduction....That...really makes senses actually.... Ahriman, also known as Angra Mainyu in Zoroism, is an.... Ancient deity that was the opposite of Ahura Mazda.... his Father other name, that aims to devastate the universe by filling it with pure evil.... oh boy.... they **** up.... and this time is not his faults.
@Hans Bloodsmith kudos to you buddy let's see how we take it from here just to be clear i was thinking that everything is going very well so now it's time to bring Chaos before we get to the ending
what do you guys say
As Zehn notice Liam come down from the stair, he then gently lift Eliana and give her to Eris.
"Hey, can you watch her for a second my Love?" He ask while glancing at Liam, Eris only nodded and give him a smile. He smiling back before give a soft kiss to both Eris and Eli cheeks.
"Thank you.... " He whisper to her ear before walks toward Liam.
"....We need to talk.... now, its something serious." He said while mentioning at the backyards door.
"Hey, can you watch her for a second my Love?" He ask while glancing at Liam, Eris only nodded and give him a smile. He smiling back before give a soft kiss to both Eris and Eli cheeks.
"Thank you.... " He whisper to her ear before walks toward Liam.
"....We need to talk.... now, its something serious." He said while mentioning at the backyards door.
Meanwhile in heaven......
"Was it really wise to send him i could've gone instead of him Gabriel",said Michael the commander of all the Angels in heaven,"You know that you are not allowed to visit Earth as long as father say so himself" Gabriel the voice of god said in a calm voice
"But he has already suffered so much why should we let him bear even more pain,he is our brother or have you taken him for a weapon too" Michael said in a tone full of anger
"Watch your words Michael you don't want to start another war" Gabriel eyed Michael with an angry glint in her blue eyes "I love him more than anyone else is capable of because i was there for him when he needed me what you did was wield him to destroy demons"She said matching his tone with her own
Michael stayed silent for a while regarding her sister for a while,"forgive me i did not meant to anger you and you know i would've never done it if i had a choice he is the only one who can end a divine existence we can only hurt our own brothers and sisters but only he can kill that's why he was made the first weapon to be used in the war of heaven"He said with remorse evident in his voice
"We can kill the demons and their offsprings but the archdemons can be purified by his own light" he finished and both of them remained silent
"Was it really wise to send him i could've gone instead of him Gabriel",said Michael the commander of all the Angels in heaven,"You know that you are not allowed to visit Earth as long as father say so himself" Gabriel the voice of god said in a calm voice
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"But he has already suffered so much why should we let him bear even more pain,he is our brother or have you taken him for a weapon too" Michael said in a tone full of anger
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"Watch your words Michael you don't want to start another war" Gabriel eyed Michael with an angry glint in her blue eyes "I love him more than anyone else is capable of because i was there for him when he needed me what you did was wield him to destroy demons"She said matching his tone with her own
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Michael stayed silent for a while regarding her sister for a while,"forgive me i did not meant to anger you and you know i would've never done it if i had a choice he is the only one who can end a divine existence we can only hurt our own brothers and sisters but only he can kill that's why he was made the first weapon to be used in the war of heaven"He said with remorse evident in his voice
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"We can kill the demons and their offsprings but the archdemons can be purified by his own light" he finished and both of them remained silent
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