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Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"...That explain the burning sensation..." He said as he feels steam started build up in his throat. "Not that i mind it" He continue as he eat the rest of his cookies.
 

Life Hacker

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 8 years
'Well that's because each and everything in existence is a part of his divinity" Zeref said narrowing his eyes at Zehn "Even you demon are a part of the divine although the divine energy only harm those who wish to harm the divine" Zeref stated in a cool voice "So its an insurance against you if you try to harm me the essence that you just digested will do more than just feel like a burning sensation" he said while sipping more green tea
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Err...duh? Of course me...and every demons in general 'want to harm the divine' its our very own instinct and nature" He said with a quote. "I mean..its not our fault that Lucifer is a pridefull bastard...because of him we got ourself banished from heaven to a burning wasteland, compleate with a set of curses. We cant pray, we cant go to church, we weaks to light and holy things, we cant even say Go- sst name without feel like an axe split our heads." He then take a sip of his tea, ignoring the unpleasant burn he feels. "Why do you think we have a civil war half a century ago? Because we tired...we tired by a constant wars with your kind. Some of us just want to enjoy our existence without worrying about excorsism by some paladins or bishops. At this he let out a sigh. "We...unlike our ancestor and elders, dont really care about the whole 'destroy the heavens and kill all the angels'. But some of us, espesially the Old generation of demons is very stubborn...espesially after Lucifers dead. Hence the civil war between the Older and New generation of Demons." He then look at Zeref bitterly. "its not that your kind make it easier..espessialy after some fallen angles started to banished from Heavens to Grigori...which formerly our territory..."
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
(Sorry for the late reply I broke a couple fingers and part of my foot yesterday, when I got home I fell asleep.)


"Zeref you can think what you msy, but do not underestimate me. You can stay as long as you like. Zehn, I don't need to punish you, your guilt is punishment enough," she said sadly patting him on the shoulder.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"....You are too kind for your own good...not that it was a bad things." He said with a tired tone, though with a barely contained happy smile. "You know....i feel like i forgot something...but what?" He then starting to rummarging his memories of today activities...lets see..wake up, have a breakfast, play with Eliana, go hunting....meet Gus Bunny, Shopping for clothes, Lunch, Waffles, meet Eri-..."Fark..." he mutter while take the paper from his (now dirty) jacket..and a bit surprise that the paper is okay..bare a few wrinkle here and there. "...You still yet tell me what a phone is...or how to 'ask out' a women." He said as he look at Casryth with dull expression.
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Now...ive been thinking. Should we give a details about our characters backstories and apperance? Because, it started to become a bit confusing (for me at least..yeah im a bit dumb)
For instance this my imagination on what the characters look likes
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CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
(I'll work on the back story and picture now :) )

She retrieved a small device from her pocket and turned on the screen. She pushed on it and brought up a picture with numbers. "Press the numbers in the order they appear on the paper, then hit the green button and hold it up to your ear. You can talk into it and hear Eris."
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Okay then...hold on for a second." H said as he noticed his claws, horns, wings and tail still out. He slowly retreating them back to his body, living only two large holes in backs of his clothes.
"Alright then..." He take the device from Casryth, and carefully examine it 'Some sort magic mirror for communication pershap?' he though as he started press number to the 'phone' '6..72..011..3 Alright then, now the green button..' He then press said button and wait, as the phone making a 'tuut-tuut' sound a few times and then.
"Hello? Casryth why d- wait is that you, Zehn?!"
Come an excited voice of Eris from it.
"Hello..? Yes, is me."
"Oh my god, im so excited."
"Yeah, im noticed." He wince a little when she said god. Then he take a look at Casryth while silently pointing at the phone.
 

Life Hacker

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Hmmph," said other Zeref as he sipped more green tea, "By the way, I think I would like to ask more questions to you though," he said while looking at Casryth "Care to humor me a little human," he said with a hint of mockery in his rough voice
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Watch your tongue, 'buddy'." He said as killer intent leaking from his body. "Wh-what?" Came a confused voice from the phone.
"Ah, nothing. It was just my dog, Spot trying to lick my tea. It was still hot." He said as Spot just staring him with annoyed and betrayed looks, making Zehn mouthing the word 'sorry' to him.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
"Sure, Zeref. Let's move to the kitchen to give Zehn and Eris some privacy," she said with a mile as she stood and began to move toward the kitchen. Asteria followed closely behind.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
'Traitor!' He shout internally, he have zeros experience with women damnit, his mother and Casryth doesnt count!
"Hello? Honey? You still there?" Ask Eris with worried tone.
"Ah, yes im here im here."
"So...how are you dear honey?"
"Im find thank you for asking."
"Your welcome...so...about the plan..." Came her voice shyly.
"Ah, yes..so where and when we gonna meet?"
"How about tomorrow at lunch? We can eat at my place, there also this new movies i want to watch at the theater, we can watch it together how about it, honey?"
"Sounds good, how about we have a dinner after the movie? Maybe you know some good..restaurand?"
"Oh, that will be lovely, honey! Sure i know just the right place!"
"Great, see you tomorrow?"
"Of course, dont forget honey, 1pm at my place. Have a nice dream sweet honey. About me if you want." She said with a flirty tone in the end.
"Y-yeah good night too E-eris." He the watch as the phone give another 'tuut' sound, signaling the end of theri conversasion.
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"That was intense..."
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
~*~ Meanwhile in the Kitchen ~*~

"Please have a seat," Casryth spoke to Zeref. "What would you like to ask? I am an open book as long as you remain respectful and level headed in my home and my town," she added as Asteria placed her head on Casryth's lap as she sat.
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
Eris sighed a bit and walked back over to the window. She drew the curtains closed and let her wings out to relax. She turned just as Minx, her cat hopped up onto the couch beside her. "I wonder if he knows what I am, Minxy," she asked thoughtfully.



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I really like that @Hans Bloodsmith :)
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
*shiver* "...I dont know why...but it seem that fates have conspired agains me...again..." He then look at Spot, whos now laying in his stomach.
"What do you thinks?" At this, the Dog only give him deadpans look (how dogs can even do it?)
"Yeah i should stop eating those cookies." All that sugars and holy energies started to mess with his head apparently. (Oh, if only he knew..)
"I wander what they are talking right now?" He continue as he glance at the kitchen entrace.
 

Life Hacker

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Hmm" came the reply from Zeref "I want to know about you, everything from the start to the person you are now at the moment and then according to your answer i will decide what stance I will have to take toward the both of you," He said while sitting on the chair
 
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