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Word Game : Telling A Story


Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
He take a deep breath before said "Once upon a time, There live a little Angle in Heaven" He said with nostalgic tone "...a really cheerfull naive Angle who have a gift of healing to help other....an Angle that always loves and loved by his Father and siblings, but noone that he love most than one of his sibling, his older brother. And how could he not? His older brother is the best afterall. His smart, wise, caring, strong, charismatic and adore by everyone. He, to put in one simple word is a'perfect'Angle....but that was the problem" He then grimace "Noone except their Father should held such 'perfection'and soon his brother started to changes. He want more and more and more, he dont want to be 'Perfect' he want to become 'the most Perfect' in short, he want to replace their Father....that is when the line is finally crossed. The Father banish him, exiled him, 'kick him out' from Heaven down to the fiery pit of Hell.
But he was not alone, for he also with many of his siblings...including the little Angle in our little stories. The Angles then changes, their wings lost its pure white shine and became as black as sky at night and the halo's on their head become wicked horns, their power changes, the little Angle gift of healing now became a curse of plagues and pestilences. And thus they became what we now call a Demon/Devil race.
And yet The little An-...Demon after all that happen still believe in his older brother, grasping on what little hope he had. So when his older brother ask him to became one of the ruler in hell, he gladly accept. And thus he and his sixth other sibling as 'Princes' started their 'rebellion' again the Heaven.
For many many many years, the Devil and the Angles wages wars again each other, bloods were spilled, flesh were torn....siblings murder each other in cold blood.
Our little An-Demon slowly grow numb with each horrifiec things he does. Yet he dint stop...he'cant' stop. Even if he want what he gonna do? His siblings is the only things he have and he promise to protect them whatever the cost....yet Fate slap him in the face. Their Father finally desceant with one goal....to finish everything. The tide of battle turn as the little Demon watch his siblings falls one by one....his sister cursed to became a horrific monster that dwell in the abyss. His second brother sealed in the center of the Earth, his third brother body burn to ash as thousands of holy spear fall into him, his little brother...nowhere to be seen and finally his oldest brother, the reason of all this terror, stare at him as their Father stab a shining sword through his heart, his brother slowly dissapear with one last serene smile in his face."
H rub his eyes, try to hold back tears "He stare as his Father cry in anguish to his child, before he ran...ran like a ,coward. And thus, with the lost of the Devilkind rulers, The Great war ended." He smile bitterly.
"But not with our little Demon story, no he started to wander around the world, fighting, killing, 'eating' any opponent he meet to became more powerfull, and with powers also come corruptions. The deities is not an exception, for he also steal many things from them, he even manage to kill a few of them. This of course worried them so they try to kill him. So, for seven years they fought, a singles Demon agains phanteons and in those time the World also suffer a consequence, as the Demon power of controling plagues, pestilence and desease, killing thous- no....millions of victim. For seven years, the 'Black Death' plagues, spread across the world. Until finally, his Father interference....again, He give a Divine Chain, made from a fraction of His power to bind the Demon to the Goddess of War Athena and God of Steel Tyr. As the two then confront the Demon. Though Tyr is killed and devoured by the Demon in the process, Goddess Athena still manages to bind the Demon, as she then seal him into a ruined temple of Athen and float him to the sky. For many years in isolation the Demon corrupted mind slowly regain his senses and emotion, and most of all guilts that tore him insides after what he has done as he recevied his punishment in silent ruin....until some 'mad' women come and free him a few centuries later...."
"....I guess we already know whos our protagonist...."
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Casryth opened her mouth and breathed out. A small cloud appeared from her lips. "Mommy there isn't much time. First I have to warn you," Elektra spoke.

"What is it?" Casryth asked lovingly.
"You only have a short time to fight this trial. In your world, your body is iced over. If you do not return soon, you will die," Elektra cried, tears spilling from her eyes. "Don't die, Mommy. You have to save Daddy."
"Okay my love," she said kissing the top of Elektra's head not ready to let go.
Elektra guided Casryth down a dark hallway with many doors. "Each of these doors is a chapter of your life. We will only travel through three for this trial." she explained.
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"That does not make you bad. You were only following what and whoyou knew. You were alone and scared and forced to forge a life for yourself at a young age. You did what you were guided to. But the moment you were able to truly make a choice for yourself, you chose good. "
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"OF COURSE I'M 'BAD'!" He snap at her "I Kill people! I EAT people! because of me thousand...no millions of innocent die!" He said frantically "If only i'm not soo naive and stupid and...and." He tried to hold back his tears "....And if only i was brave enough to give up and die....all of this not gonna happens..." He started to sob "....no..even death is too good for me."
 

SeraphineSanctum

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 7 years
"Don't you say that. You didn't die because you were meant to be here for Casryth, and for me. Everything happens for a reason," she said holding Zehn in her arms as he cried out.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Slowly, together, they reached the first door. Elektra opened it and Casryth was sucked through into the abyss.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
He stiffed for moment before his wall finally crumble, he hug Eris tightly like if he let her go she will dissappear. He burried his face in the crook of her neck, tears falling freely as he let out all emotion he feels. Guilts, regrets, sadness, angers, fears...happiness, joy...."Thank you....im sorry...dont go please...thank you...thank..dont leave me..i hate it..." He mutter it like a mantra between his sob.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Casryth hit the ground hard, knocking the wind out of her. They were in a dark room, and a voice made it's way through the darkness. "I am sorry, but your child is sick, very sick. I do not believe she will live beyond the fall of the final leaf of the season," the manly voice said. A room materialized around her. Elektra was asleep in a straw bed.

"There must be something we can do," a familiar, warming voice called out. She looked to the side to see Liam, his arms wrapped around a much younger, Casryth. She seemed in shock at the news of the fate of her little girl.

The pain of this memory ripped through her like she was feeling it all over again.

"You have to relive this memory without interfering Mommy, that is your trial to observe in her body," Elektra said sadly.
 

CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Before Casryth could respond, she was sucked into the body of her younger self.

"There is nothing except that we can make the time that she has as painless as possible," the doctor said sadly.
"If her body is done fighting, I cannot force her to suffer," Casryth said painfully, She recognized the words coming out of her mouth, but they didn't feel like hers anymore.
"I agree, if she is in pain, let us ease that and make the most of her time," Liam whispered sadly.

Then it was as if everything fast forwarded, they were back in this room, and Elektra lay in Casryth's lap. She coughed painfully and held her mother's hand as her life began to slip away.
"Mommy loves you so much, and if you have to stop fighting, I understand. Grandmother and Grandfather will be waiting for you."
"Daddy understands too," Liam spoke sitting beside them, holding Elektra's other hand. "We are right here, and we will always love you."
"What will happen to you two?" Elektra asked.
"Mommy has to stay here and make sure Daddy stays out of trouble," Casryth spoke, the words hurting her more and more as each one passed her lips.
"And Daddy has to be here to start trouble and help Mommy protect our people," Liam said with a sad smile.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
Zehn only nodded, though still not loosesing his hug.
"....Hey.." He start after calming himself. "...You said..that you don't deserve (which is the most bullsh*** things i have heard)....why is that?" He ask with muffled voice.
 

Hans Bloodsmith

Hardcore Lv9️⃣
Member for 8 years
"....You are stupid you know that?" He ask as he slowly lift his head to look at her eyes.
"If you give a...scum like me....a chances....why dont you do the same for yourself....at least, your reason is...pure...unlike mine." He said, though there envy in his voice to the person Eris love.
 

Life Hacker

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 8 years
Meanwhile...

"I thought you will stay here to help that woman overcome her trials" Asherah said as she watched her son sprouting his wings ready to leave the place
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"I'm helping her",Zeref said "by making sure to stay away from her, the second trial can only be done by her"
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"and besides i'm needed elsewhere i don't have any more time to waste on these lesser beings than i already have"
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"You do know that i can sense lie and relectance in your voice" Asherah said with a mocking smile
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"Meaning?" Zeref said with an emotionaless face
 
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CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Just then everything around them jumped forward.
They were sitting in Elektra's room, Casryth held her weak sickly body in her arms. She fought back the tears as the last few breaths of life escaped her daughter's lips. Just then, Liam burst through the door and rushed to their side. They both held their daughter as she slipped away. Casryth sobbed in anguish as her little girl was gone.

Her spirit form returned to Elektra's side and they were yanked back into the hall.
 

Life Hacker

Savage Lv6️⃣
Member for 8 years
"Looks like her trial has started already"Asherah said in an amused tone as she looked at her son, "I'm going to heaven as i already said my work here is done" Zeref said in a neutral tone
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Then as if something clicked inside her head her smile widened and her eyes were lit up "Oh! Now i know why you are leaving her i suppose you do have pressing concerns in heaven be a sweet boy and say hi to daddy from me darling"Asherah said as she prepared to leave as well
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"She really is something else i don't know how they even fell in love with each other" Zeref said in a tense voice "Well time to go back home" he said as he turned back a final time to see the place he was leaving and then sporting his heavenly wings he flew toward heaven
 
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CordeliaCross

?Freelance ? Writer ?
Member for 8 years
Elektra led Casryth down the hall as she fought to keep her composure. Then, another door opened and sucked Casryth through.

This time she soared throught the air until she landed on her feet at the base of the abyss. She peered around as the inside of a large castle became visible. Liam sat the front of the hall in his throne besides hers. She made her way through the hall, dressed in her medium armor and her hair turned back. She approached Liam and he stood. She gave him a brief kiss before they both sat in their respective thrones. She peered around the room at the audience of townspeople. "Thank you all for joining us today. It is a time honored tradition for us to listen and hear the words of our people. Here we are not king and queen. Here we are one, and willing to hear any and all thoughts regarding the kingdom and to see how we can offer aid. Please allow the first speaker to come forward," Casryth spoke and the room silenced.

A Man stepped forward and just as he was about to speak a small child burst through the doors. Instantly, Casryth and Liam were on their feet. Her spirit melded with her body once more. "I am sorry to interrupt, but there is a bad woman, a bad witch in the woods. She trapped six children there I got away. Please help!"

"Where?!" Liam and Casryth asked in unison, the townspeople jumping to their feet as well. They followed the child back to the others.

Casryth's heart sank, this scene was all too familiar. A woman stood with the six children circled around her, suspended in time.

"There is no saving the children from this fate," the woman cackled.

"I offer myself as tribute, but you must leave this place and never return if I give you myself," Liam called out. "I know what you are, witch, entrap me instead," he called out.

Knowing the fate of her husband it took everything in Casryth to allow this scene to unfold just as it once had. She had to remember that this wasn't real, it was a test.

The woman cackled and Liam turned to Casryth and took her hands in his, "I will always find you, remember?" he asked as he stared into Casryth's eyes.

"And I will always find you," she replied as he kissed her deeply and and released her hands. He stepped backwards and fell victim to the curse. The children slowly came back to life, and rushed to their parents as the townspeople crowded around them.

Casryth stepped forward and reached her hand into her chest and removed her heart. She broke it into two pieces, crying out painfully. She reached into Liam's chest and ripped out his. She bound half of his heart to hers and did the same with the other halves. She whispered an incantation over the hearts and at the same time she thrust one into her chest and the other into his.

Then they were thrown back into the hallway of doors.
 
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